My peer review of paper 2, I made comments on the persons use of evidence, here I said how the evidence was a good quote to help the reader understand the point the author was trying to get across. I also discussed a piece of evidence where the author should try to add on to the evidence with stuff from the IMRAD cheat sheet as to add to her discussion. I also discussed ideas that the author could add to their paper, for example when the author was summarizing I suggested to elaborate upon their I say. Furthermore, I discussed the author’s organization of her ideas, she had a good flow in her essay and connecting two different authors of the articles we were reading.
